Tuesday, October 31, 2006

I've taken it


Take it like a man they say
They don't know
Forever, what she has taken away

Took a mind, a body, and a soul
Left a shadow with nothing at all

With that I must hate
The fact
That I wasn't so great

Gave what I thought was everything
It wasn't felt
And I was left here
Only to regret

3 Comments:

Blogger Dumbass said...

very touching,
penitence always cause so much agony

9:11 AM  
Blogger Dudi said...

Took a mind, a body, and a soul
Left a shadow with nothing at all

I loved that part.

Passion yields poetry.
excellent.

10:45 PM  
Blogger Enigma said...

live and learn :)

2:28 PM  

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